Menu
Posted On: 26-May-2021 04:45:04 Posted In: My Stories / The rake.
Posted By: IdkWhatToNameMyself
Back FOLLOW ME




Jack Odd World. Part 1 ' The beginning '


Narrator-  It all Began In a Campsite. A living scarecrow Patrolled the Area With nobody passing without permission.

Narrator-  The scarecrow Was watching for any sudden movements or living things on a tall rock. 

Scarecrow- " The scarecrows Eyes Turned Left right up and down Looking And protecting. "

Jack- ' He Walked over the the campsite harmless And Slowly. '

Scarecrow- " Hello Jack it is nice to see you again. "

Jack- ' Hello. Its nice to see you to. i'm looking for somebody if you can help me. '

Jack- ' He held a Photo of a Strange Creature '

Jack- ' His name is the "Rake" I need to find it. '

Scarecrow- " How convenient I had seen him yesterday Climbing a tree. "

Scarecrow- " He looked Sad Or Angry. "

Jack- ' Thank you for your help. '

Scarecrow- " Your welcome Now please leave the territory And don't mess with anything. "

Jack- ' I respect Your Policy. '

Jack- ' He walked away And went somewhere else in the forest. '

Jack- ' He heard a Small Child Crying somewhere He thought it was just his head playing tricks but he kept hearing it. '

Jack- ' He approached The small Child '

Jack- ' Ey Kid. Whats wrong Your out here in the forest alone. '

???- ' Oh.. Hi.. Im just waiting for my mom and dad to come back They Left.. '

???- ' Was I to loud?. Sorry if I was.. im Just really sad.. '

Jack- ' No Your fine. " He sat down Next to ??? " Whats your name by the Way? '

Demon Kid- ' Oh. I dont really have a name My Mom and dad called me Demon kid tho so you can call me that I guess..'

Jack- ' ah Ok then. Do you want to come with me? I dont think your parents are coming back Kid. '

Demon Kid- ' Oh well If i can then i Wa- '

Jack- ' He grabbed him '

Jack- ' Then lets go. '

Demon Kids Mind- ' I couldn't even finish my sentence.'

Jack- ' He pulled out his phone and Called somebody. '

Jack- ' Hey. Its been a while and i need to know your location Really quick. '

--------------

Jack- ' Sounds good '

Demon kid- ' Who were you talking to? '

Jack- ' Oh just a friend. '

Narrator- ' They arrived at a watch tower '

Narrator- ' They both Climbed the Ladder and Opened the door in the watch tower '

- The end Of Part 1 -

2 Comments


Jasiel Fabila


yay

May 26, 2021



IdkWhatToNameMyself


Next Part is coming when i have time :)

May 26, 2021



Add Comment

Your Email address will not be published


Leave Reply